Monday, September 29, 2008

Another

I was just notified that "Time & Chance" was accepted into the Rockport Film Festival in the coastal town of Rockport, TX. My good friend Eric Thomas hails from there, so it was my solemn duty to enter. I'm very glad I did.

Also, things are going well here at the CCIFF. "T&C" screened this afternoon at the Universal Citiwalk AMC and was received well (lots of laughter). I hope to report more good news as the week progresses.

UPDATE 10/2/08: "Time & Chance" didn't take home any awards last night at the Gala, but I did get a lot of encouraging feedback from the other filmmakers and audience members.

Wednesday, September 17, 2008

Script Finalist

Here's an out of the blue item: My script "Bad Moon Rising" (or at least the first ten pages of it) is one of four finalists in the Wi-Fi "First Ten" Screenplay Competition. (Wi-Fi is the Wilmington Film community.)

Yes, it's one of those script competitions where you enter the 1st 10 pages of your script. After all, that's the part that's supposed to grab the reader and compel them to continue.

I'll let you know how it turns out.

Any guesses what it's about from the title? (And Andrew, you can't play since you read it already.)

UPDATE 9/23/08: I just found out that I did not win the competition, but I was one of the top four finalists (no ranking, however). My congratulations to Julie Kenner and her script "Kitty Hawk"!

Tuesday, September 09, 2008

A Friend's Film

Hey... if you're into checking out independent short films, click this link to see the trailer for "Witt's Daughter". It's written, directed & produced by my friend, Carole Holliday.

Carole is a talented story artist who has worked on several Disney & Dreamworks projects. Like me, she wanted to try her hand at live action filmmaking. So check out the site & read her blog. I think she did good!

But neither of us has figured out a way to make money on a short film.

"Time & Chance" in the CCIFF!

Yes, the little film that could has made it into the Cinema City International Film Festival to be held Sept 29 - Oct 1 at the Universal Sheraton & Universal City Walk in L.A.
I'll be flying out for the celebration. I'm thinking about selling ad space in my Tux like a Nascar driver to fund the trip. I think a nice big Oreo ad across my cummerbund should cover my air fare, yeah?

Wednesday, September 03, 2008

Character Traits - Part 2

Quite possibly you are familiar with one of the several personality tests you can take to see what type of person you are. Some of the most famous are the Big 5 test and the Jung-Meyers-Briggs formula. They break people down into four or five basic types with some sub-categories within them. You find out if you are more emotional or analytical, introverted or extroverted, organized or sloppy, mathematical or literary, etc, and how much of each you tend to be. I'm still not sure what I am supposed to do with this information. I know I don't like numbers, nor cleaning the kitchen, and would rather explain myself in pictures than in an essay. I like learning, but not school, working, but not an office. And no matter what I am working on, I would probably prefer to be doing something else. The grass is, after all much greener over there. But, I have once again become side-tracked.

There is also the analysis that determines if you are a Lion, an Otter, a Golden Retriever or a Beaver (Leader, playful, go-getter, or hard worker). Centuries ago, Europeans broke things down into the four basic humours: Phlegmatic, Sanguin, Choleric, & Melancholy. Everyone was suppose to have potential to be all of these but supposedly, they were controlled by how much bile or blood, or other fluids you had in or out of balance.
Frankly, I believe all of these methods tell us the same thing in different words for different generations and segments of the populous.

Of course, Carl Jung developed his Archetype personalities, and Joseph Campbell and Christopher Vogler built on these concepts. As a writer, I think it is important that we are familiar with all of these so as to help us define our characters and make them believable. But I am not going to delve into explanations all these theories. No, I am going to entertain you with my own, from my own observance and experience.

I think we can divide people into categories by how they react to rules. And by rules, I mean laws as well as social customs. Naturally, we can divide the world into the lawbreakers and the law abiders, but we know that it’s not so black and white.

Let us discuss the law abiders. People obey laws for different reasons. In a story, a law or rule represents a conflict, when we are confronted with a choice to do something our own way, or the acceptable way. Seemingly most people choose the acceptable way. Why? What is their motivation?

Some obey for fear of punishment. There are even those who will assume laws where there are none just to be safe. They just want to do the right thing. It is paramount to these personalities to get along in the world without making waves. Like worker ants, if they get out of line there might be serious reprisals; anything between social embarrassment and jail.

Closely related are those who obey rules merely to set themselves apart from the rabble. These people don’t really enjoy doing the right thing itself, they enjoy being better than others who don’t. This doesn’t just go for laws, I’m talking about social circles, too. These are the type of folks who pride themselves on immaculate grammar and vocabulary, on wearing the proper style shoes, or choosing the right wine. They aren’t just high-brow, no, rule-keepers are found in every social strata and will tell you when you bring the wrong casserole to a church function, or don’t have enough spirit at a ball game, or mock you when you don't know the difference between DSL and an IP address. They love to be in a club and to know more than you. They more rules they obey, the deeper into the inner circle they get. Fascism thrives on people like this, yet they have found fertile ground all over the world.

Believe it or not, there are the altruistic people, too, who obey the rules because they know it is the right thing to do, that the rules were set into place to help them as well as others. You can tell these people because they are not afraid to break an unjust rule, nor break a just rule at an opportune moment, obeying the spirit of the law, rather than the letter. Like Sheriff Andy Taylor explained to Opie; He gave the example of a fellow who sees another man drowning in a lake with a “no swimming” sign. Does he break the posted law? Of course, it’s only right. Our first two examples would struggle over the decision until the poor chap in the lake was dead.
Is your protagonist one of these people? Is your antagonist? It definitely calls into question how we would categorize the “good guy”. Why are they “good”, and do others around them consider them good?

Compare Jean Valjean & Inspector Javert from “Les Miserables”, one was a law-breaker who did the right thing, the other was a law enforcer who was a brother to the Devil.
I will continue my dissertation later with the subject of lawbreakers….

One person said, “There are two types of people in the world: Those who divide the population in to two groups and those who don’t.”

Another person said: “There are three types of people in the world: Those who are good at math and those who aren’t.”

Tuesday, September 02, 2008

Character Traits - Part 1

I was working on a script over the weekend. Struggling is a better word. I hit a block about a week ago and can’t seem to get over it.

I started with an outline of my story, so I knew where the basic act breaks were and when certain events should happen and how to get the plot and characters from A to B to C. However…

(“however” is another word for ‘Big But’. “Tell me about your big butt, Simone.” 10 points for whoever names that movie quote).

… I got to about page 75, and I’m stuck like a VW Bug in a foot of mud. I diverted from my outline a little, now I need my Jeep with 4-wheel drive! It seemed the characters started making their own decisions without me. Suddenly on page 60, April turned to Bret and said, “You better come with me”. Wait! What? April was supposed to go alone! I need Bret to stay behind, and... well... wait a minute, this could get interesting. So while everything started making more sense and becoming more entertaining, my script was derailing from my outline.

I know I can get everyone back to the place I need them to be, I’ve just created a huge gulf for them to jump to get there.

I got stuck because I lost sight of what everyone wanted. My characters seemed to get a little distracted from their original courses of action, like when I run to the store for hamburger buns and find myself a half hour later with a shopping cart full of groceries, trying to decide between the Pillsbury chocolate-chip or sugar cookie dough. Yes, I needed everything in the basket, but not for the cookout. My movie was getting full of storylines that were extras – future deleted scenes.

So yesterday I went back through the four major players in my story and wrote down what they wanted, their conscious and subconscious desires. It was an eye opener. Mainly because I realized I needed to go back & re-write the first act to reflect these traits more clearly.

I do this exercise for scripts I read for friends. I have found that I’m a decent script analyst. Like a home inspector, I can poke and prod at the structure and point out the weak parts that need shoring up. I just have a little more trouble doing this with my own work most of the time. (I wonder why.)

(No, I won’t do this for your script, unless you hire me. It’s time consuming and takes me away from my regular work. If you want a script evaluation, we can talk rates. I trade favors with my writer friends.)

So now I have my characters with clearer direction. Not just goals. I had those already. Like Dorothy and E.T. wanted to go home, and Frodo wanted to get the Ring to Mordor, each of my characters has a stated plot goal. What I needed was clearer understanding on what each character wanted in life. What were their personalities? You see, I found that my initial notes just described surface traits, and they came off more like stereotypes. I needed to know how each would confront the same conflict differently, how do their worldview and psyche affect their decision making process?

For me, it comes down to how we view "the rules".

More to come…

Monday, September 01, 2008

If you can help...

I don't know if any of you are surfing the internet today, but if you are and you happen to stumble upon this blog, please take a moment and a couple extra dollars and make a donation to one of two (or both) of these charities that are especially close to my heart this weekend:






http://www.mda.org/ http://www.redcross.org/

These are both secure links.